Hi there!

Not sure if this is a good place to post this, but I'm currently looking for a test read for an script I have written out for a VN I'd like to work on.

It'll be called Superheated. It's a post-apocalypse adventure novel that takes place in the sweltering heat of the post climate crisis American west. I've taken some inspiration from Fallout New Vegas and Borderlands for the world, but at the moment it's about two rival sisters, both after the same bounty.

If that's at all interesting at all, I have the script mostly written out, but I feel like I want some eyes on it to make sure it's at all interesting - or if it needs some revitalization. I've never put out my writing so I'm interested/nervous to see the reaction.

[There is some mature language, be aware.] || Here's a google drive link to the script.

Feel free to leave a comment if you read, good or bad. Anything helps to learn what to fix or change.